Ryouta - Valentine Theme

Yeah! I think you've got some improvement here for sure ^^ I really like this one.
So i'll start off by saying the face is really nicely shaded. Your flesh tones also look better and more natural this time around. Great job with that. The background is also sweet and simple and gets the point across, like shows the viewer what this piece is about. Also, better job on the hair!
There are a few things that could use a little bit more shading. Especially because the face has such detailed shadows and highlights, you could have def added more on the clothing. Under the envelope looks nice, and his flesh tones as i said before, but his shirt and jacket and tie don't really have much shading except for in the deepest crevices. You could also add a few wrinkles to this, since clothing never is just flat, and once you add a couple of wrinkles, it is easier to tell where the shadows go.
I am really impressed with the skin and hair, great job and i can't wait to see the next piece ^^